Trying an Elfchen

Thanks to Cindy for trying this out with her post entitled Aging. I’ve been tossed around by enough of Chile’s big waves to see them as something more than falling off a surfboard. So often they are lessons in humility that carry into my work as an instructional coach.

Here’s my shot at a 1,2,3,4,1 elfchen poem:

surfing

crest-fallen foam

churning breathless thoughts

below surface-level conversations about

glassiness.